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MindFrosting
Bon Banks
United States, WA, Bellingham

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The Tech You Thank You

The Tech You Thank You

This award caused me to wax rhapsodic,
The next line was great, but I forgot it,
The magnet swung too close you see,
And degoused my little brain all free,
Of current thought this ruined unit,
Tries to find the fuse that blew-it,
Now with gears all running smoothly,
I'll try again to write to thee,
My thanks to say with much foam and spittle,
I do thank all the little people.

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noodel Comment by: noodel - 2006-09-04 21:58
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ahaha that's cute. and by cute i mean really funny. welcome to SI :D (you'll learn to love the crazy people, i promise!)
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-04 07:56
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LOL! Yes, welcome to Spoiled/Damned Ink. Love the poem and can't wait to read more. :)
digs Comment by: digs - 2006-09-04 06:38
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Hi, Bon, and welcome to Spoiled Ink (Damnedink?). This made me smile.
LauraBanks Comment by: LauraBanks - 2006-09-03 21:34
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Hey, this is funny! I can't wait to see more.
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