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nonalienabductee
Niccole Segura
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United States, Pennsylvania/Ohio

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Cheat Me Fair

Cheat me fair, baby,
Lie me truthfully,
Won't stand for more lies
Can't take no more honesty
Leave me, but with me, baby
Hate me with love
Can't take no more tenderness
But you better be nice
I'll be your detested darling
Your beloved enemy
Cheat me fair, baby
No thank you, but please.

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athousandmiles Comment by: athousandmiles - 2006-11-28 10:52
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I really enjoyed this piece. Its something I think nearly everyone can relate to. I'm gonna have a look through the rest of your stuff, and I'll add you to my readers list if that's ok.
JohnnySodoff Comment by: JohnnySodoff - 2006-10-10 13:10
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I think this a very honest representation of the hard truth about love. You know, wanting to be loved and having to deal with the pain of being hurt, not really sure if you can handle the truth sometimes. That's what I took from it anyways.
isismarie Comment by: isismarie - 2006-10-04 22:24
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This is a nice nice way of using words. Its great to see you go from opposite to make them the same. Its interesting reading it. I think I had to read it twice, but it was really cool.
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2006-09-06 00:25
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Loved the title, and really well written. Short and sweet.
writerpassion Comment by: writerpassion - 2006-09-04 21:15
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Interesting play with words
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