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Archana Borhade
India, Maharashtra, Pune 411007

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Warrior

Amidst the downpour, the earth shivers
Existence is threatened, living becomes a luxury
But when you learn to weather the gale
The storm means nothing'¦.

Caught in the midst of the mist,
One fights to find a strong footing in the invisible ground beneath
But when you have etched your path through the quicksand
The mangroves mean nothing'¦.

Lost in the forest, fumbling in the deep woods
The calls of the night bring the fear of the unseen
But when you can light up the path in a black hole
The darkness of the night means nothing'¦..

As the fire of passion burns
It consumes the sense of the mind
But when you have won it against the devil
The human temptation means nothing'¦.

In love one suffers
The pain of separation, the agony of rejection
But when you have sacrificed all your heart at its altar
The heartache means nothing'¦.

The greatest enemy lies within
With the strength of a thousand men
But when you learn to tame the beast beneath
The mightiest of the opponents outside mean nothing'¦.

In life there are differences to overcome,
Struggles to cope with, hardships to be borne
But when you are the warrior
The battles mean nothing.

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tamershaban Comment by: tamershaban - 2008-07-25 17:30
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Good Poem
zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-05-15 09:58
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You set a cadence that most readers can follow easily and it enhances the message. good read, thanks for sharing.
OriginalRisky1 Comment by: OriginalRisky1 - 2006-10-31 18:25
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That could have come from Krishna to Arjuna on the battlefield of Kurukshetra. We are only at war with our true nature and our ignorant desires. Nice imagery.

Tucker
Comment by: - 2006-10-20 16:27
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I loved this poem. I really thought it was well written and inspirational. It outlined how hard life could be but that we all have it within us to do better. Loved it.
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-10-08 14:37
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I really enjoyed reading this. I too believe that you are your own worst enemy. The repeat of 'means nothing' at the end of each stanza and the links throughout were well done.
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