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sinking in stress and suffering
so static about status is made
silly to seek such sickness
still pining for signing a name
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The alliteration is very effective in emphasizing the feeling and message in this short and very nice poem. I like the sound it creates, it adds to the sinking feeling. Much enjoyed.
