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clockworkjuice
Justin Blackledge
United States, OR, Oregon City

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time

short sweet conclusion
savior of failed illusion
let's fill up the place
until the clock has
lost it's face

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bounarjaf Comment by: bounarjaf - 2008-04-19 09:24
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Impressive economy or words and a good philosophy of life as well.
GreenIce Comment by: GreenIce Online- 2007-07-02 22:06
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i love this..short but sweet...and the ending...I love that...I am filled..even with few words...thank you
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-02-28 18:47
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short and sweet. but good just the same
Comment by: - 2006-10-01 21:03
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awkwardly amusing! I enjoyed... the last two lines really hit it off nicely. good imagery!
Sarah Jane Comment by: Sarah Jane - 2006-09-14 03:57
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wo I like it. Short and sweet is soemthing that isn't always used well. But this is very effective. Well done.
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