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jeden1
jeden1
Estonia

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Battlefield

I struggle from beginning to the end
Like brave animal
I do not feel faint
Only frantic yell echo is in my ears
Dazzling light is in my eyes
It is night

Suddenly I fall down
Burr is terrifying
I lay on the ground
Inert to move over
My comrades run straight ahead
They cannot stop
And I cannot scream
Pain is strong
I am weak

Oh, I do not want to die
Keep me alive
Make alive my mind
Give me another day

How I will get there
Long way is too difficult
I cannot move
I am in trap
But I am still alive
Won't let me die
I want to survive

I hear voices
Slowly close my eyes
Somebody touches my body
I feel like I fly

Few days and nights have gone
I have been unconscious
Nice face smiles
Is it my angel?
Where is the battlefield?
I close my eyes
I am calm
I have not a pain
I am alive

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arabic2 Comment by: arabic2 - 2007-01-06 11:17
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i like it,in fact it remind me of gladiator!and i think it is beautiful
sashahaq Comment by: sashahaq - 2006-09-07 17:37
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I lIke it! iS IT ABT THE ENDLESS STRUGGLE OF SURVIVAL >< WELL WRITTEN
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