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Come to me and in me
with your elixir of life
help me rise
to the top of a mountain
so high, just to fall
into your gentle embrace
that catches me the moment
I heed to be held.
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Mo says:
"Boy oh Boy! This is a nice one. This is written from a persons heart and soul. That's where poetry comes from. You know, the real stuff, the real deal."
short and sweet, sexy and vulnerable. I enjoyed this poem - I KNOW I KNOW: I am "SUPPOSED" to say more than "I liked your poem" but there is nothing to change or edit, I couldn't find any grammer or spelling mistakes, so... I LIKED IT.
