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He Saves!
It's been 2,000 years
But what happen still effects me
He was beaten and flogged
And then bang, bang, bang
He was nailed to a cross
He was smitten and scourned
He had done nothing wrong
They all hated Him
We all hated Him
But He still stayed on that cross
He could've gotten off
But then we would've been condemned to hell forever
Even though we treat Him like nothing
We mock him and scourn Him
He didn't get down
He didn't condemn us He saved us and redeemed us
We did nothing. He gave us everything
But His death isn't the end
Three days later He rose again!!!
So He not only took our sin
But He conquered it forever
Now He is our Brother, Savior, Redeemer, Friend
Now we can be in heaven with Him
Hallelujah!
Amen!
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Comment by: Cherley - 2006-12-28 16:25
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| I enjoyed this very much. I can never get enough reminders about the sacrifice that Jesus made for us, for me. |
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| Love it. Glad to see you're so open about your beliefs. |
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| Love it. Glad to see you're so open about your beliefs. |
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| It was very up front, and the first lines catch the readers attention and make them carry through to read the rest of the poem, I myself am a christian and I found that this touched close to home, great poem overall |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-07 12:44
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He was smitten and scourned
We mock him and scourn Him
Scorn, no "u".
Wow. I like the drama here. Not an easy subject to tackle without sounding insane. You do a great job. Thanks! Teri |
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