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Kantar
Dan Goodger
United Kingdom, Devon, Torquay

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I see....

As I look around and see
There is nothing here left to be
There is no fear...or nothing left in me
I have seen it all but now I see
Nothing, there is nothing left to find
There isn't anything left, nothing for the grind
I have lost you and you have lost me
What other pain should I feel what should it be
I feel nothing and there you will find, there you will see
That it is over from you to me

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Kantar Comment by: Kantar - 2006-09-06 20:02
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Rather small but meh, give us a bell and tell me what ya'll think
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