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yourlatestcliche
Kayleigh Stabler
United States, Michigan, Redford

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Still Bare Prints

Shamelessly she poses nude for the first time
In front of the experienced camera manned by
A scruffy artist who, almost in love,
Lights the stage, illuminates her beauty
As she perfectly transforms to a tease
Melting the artist with her intensive
Gaze, her flawless body, he begs her 'please,
Stay just like that, perfectly seductive'
She follows his instructions, not moving
A single muscle, remaining so still
That her body mildly starts shaking
Under the pressure, she's ready to kill
Anyone that crosses her path with her
Beauty and stunningly impressive gaze

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prolificsantu Comment by: prolificsantu - 2007-07-06 22:00
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but after a while she will have grey hair, and the cameramen moves away. she will be no more beautiful. and at the time i will damp down and panick
oh beauty
how is it that you are no beauty now
how is it that you have got grey hair now
the enchating and seductiveness went but how?
TheSourMindofZPx Comment by: TheSourMindofZPx - 2007-05-19 07:18
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Short but straight to the point. It took me there.
Garret Schuelke Comment by: Garret Schuelke - 2007-04-20 22:45
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If this woman was real, I would believe she could kill someone with her beauty.

Good poem.
cynic Comment by: cynic - 2007-02-16 17:52
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Great subject and great opening line.
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2007-02-15 23:14
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Fragile yet unwavering.
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