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sashahaq
saniul haque
United States, TX, irving

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FOREVER

Stay close to me, mY love
I have carried this pain so far
I have fought the battle
But I lost the war.
I remain to be the mute witness
Follower of your happiness
I sacrifised my soul
I sold myself
My shadow happened to carry another hole in its soul.
I lost my shadow
Now my soul was nothing but a naked,little widow
Now intensions overshadowed,
soul swallowed , happiness waiting to be happening
Pieces of peace paced forward in disgrace
fallen followers , rose up once again to win the never-ending race.

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Comment by: - 2006-09-22 07:47
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this is really good I loved your other one and I like this one even more!!! Great write! You are amzing! I think I am going to read more from you!

~Princess Padge
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