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| I hope to master Haiku. I believe you have. |
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Comment by: sudipal - 2007-04-30 15:43
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| I like it. It leaves a lot to think about. |
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| Nice haiku! It does get me wondering about those devils... kinda scary in a way. But the last line is kinda a happy one with "perfect soul". hmm... |
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the beauty of writing haiku is that one can read them over and over and never feel exhausted at having done so, instead, we allow ourselves to develop an array of meanings to tag onto the words that are written before us and blah blah blah...
Nice one, man. |
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| I love the art of haiku and yours is great. "Certain devils"? Hmmm. I agree with greensleaves- very suggestive there. Good haiku. Yvy |
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