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CatmanStu
Stuart Cattell
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

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Confusion.

You come in tins, bags and cheesecakes too
Segmented joy hidden under the skin
Containing sweet bliss with its bright orange hue
Oh wait my bad. You said mandolin.

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Comment by: - 2006-09-15 18:32
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There are many mandolin poems lately. I wonder why. This one's very funny and it made me think of oranges and tangerines. I think I'm getting sick, too. bye Doris
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-09-12 05:57
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The ones in tins are best. Fresh ones are too hard to peel, except at Christmas time when the skins seem looser. I'm rambling. I have a cold and maybe a fever and I'm on too many drugs. Bollocks to it. Fun poem.
Comment by: - 2006-09-09 20:09
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You are a nut! Funny poem, Cat. -Leah
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-09-09 10:50
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Excellent! A perfect piece for a surprise challenge. Clever, clever, clever man.
InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-09-09 02:55
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Lol. This was a good approach to such a hard challenge. Big kudos to you.
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