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CatmanStu
Stuart Cattell
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

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Restoration

There it was,
buried amongst the clutter
of similar,
yet somehow less radiant
objects of artistic beauty.
Its brilliance shrouded
by layers of time
that betray
a respect to memory

There are others,
newer, better kept,
some with paint still drying;
I cannot look away.
It calls to me,
to my curiosity,
my need to see what
Beauty is buried beneath

My brush
gently wipes away
the dust of days upon days

My cloth
delicately dissolves
the residue of time passing too slowly

until finally

There it is
Sitting on the wall
amongst other similar,
yet somehow more diminished
works of artistic renown.
Its brilliance illuminating
halls that seem larger
than the dimensions contained

I may not have created that picture
I may never own that picture
But as long as I work here
I can look upon its radiance
and tell myself that
I helped the world to see
The glory that was once
Seen by the heart of another.

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Comment by: - 2006-09-15 18:36
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This is so beautiful I'm almost speechless. It has a certain quality I can't describe. Magical maybe? I really loved each line and didn't want it to end. bye Doris
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-09-12 05:55
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Lovely allegory.

"the residue of time passing too slowly" was an especially resonnant line.
Comment by: - 2006-09-09 11:35
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This is breathtakingly beautiful. It is my very favorite of yours. I love it...wow, what a poem!! -Leah
Comment by: - 2006-09-08 21:20
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Your poem is beautiful. I am captured by all these images and emotions here. Each of these feelings I have felt. You have described them in perfect words. This poem is very honest and strong. It is one of the best pieces of writing I have read here and I love these last two lines.

Enrique
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-08 19:55
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This is gorgeous and fits so many scenarios and situations. The penultimate stanza is perfect. Okay, the whole thing is perfect, but that one stanza stands out like a beacon. Great, great job. T. xo

PS - :)
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