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Comment by: - 2007-11-01 01:13
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Perfectly dark. beautifully dark...celebrate it for all it's worth, for in darkness you can only find enlightenment.
Respect,
The Freakshow |
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| I'd say "nice". Dark, but not terribly. Give me some concrete images. I know there is nothing much concrete in the dark, but show me the illegible letter, the dip-pen, the ink bottle, the impossibly twisted sheets, the print, is it of a cheek?, on the blotter, show me the bored photo. |
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| I know how that is, I felt this about 3 months ago.... sometimes you got to wonder is love ever ment to be? Very nice job, I really like this one. |
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This is quite dark. The flow of the piece is really really good. The emotions in this are very deep indeed. Wonderful writing. That touches the heart of the reader. Well done.
Wayne
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Comment by: foxfyre - 2006-09-10 17:02
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| you have put down in words what so many of us have felt so many times. the greif we feel when we find we have been betrayed. very stirring and wonderfuly composed |
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