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Comment by: Anne - 2007-02-17 22:34
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| alot of emotion in a little poem . excellent |
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Comment by: - 2006-10-10 04:29
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| these poems of yours though relativley short- are tastey and twisty and chewy like licorace. Fun to pronounce aloud. |
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Comment by: lsjones - 2006-09-11 20:48
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| E's right. Very powerful emotions in such few words is what I strive for. Great job. |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-11 20:29
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I enjoy how you use a little amount of words to create such deep emotions. The pain here is very apparent. 'Shudder-breathing' says so much. I like poems like this one. It is very good.
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