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rosysophia
Rosa Sophia
United States, PA, Telford

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The Museum

I can feel my nerves separating
envision them, twisted little sinews
like the ones they had in glass cases
clutching mementos; words, books, pages
things they would have taken to the grave.

Hands with tiny threads
blue, red and purple
joined as if by a sewer's needle
craftily wound and woven'
snapped, sharply, without a second's notice.

I never touched the glass
others did, desperate for the companionship
of plasticated death'not me!
I left, paid my dues and ran away
jumped behind the wheel and here I am.

I can feel my nerves splitting
as I become one with the continuous
woven thread of afternoon traffic
many colors; blue, purple, red
taken to the pavement, a hot summer's
metallic painting.

I can hear the guard in the museum saying
that I shouldn't be nervous
I shouldn't be afraid
but I cannot reject the feelings of dread
being near these woven threads, about to burst.

I'm revving the engine, God only knows
I never wanted to go this fast
and my knuckles are white on the steering wheel
I can feel my nerves breaking, separating, snapping
as though the guard reached through the glass
and broke the perfect, glossy, plasticated hand.

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Comment by: - 2006-09-15 19:06
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i am so not sure what you are doing with it...but i like it and should copy to word annd print a copy for myself to ponder...is the museaum a metaphor or literal...at first i thought it was the one human body exhibit that is currently down here in fl, thought it might have been up there...but regadless awesome writing....
Jamilah Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-09-14 22:23
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You are highly recommended by Paul, who is an accomplished poet in his own right. And he was right about your poetry. This is beautifully written, with intricate phrasing and perfect word choice. Excellent.
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