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Comment by: zepol - 2007-06-26 21:50
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| I am wondering how long it took to write this. It seems difficult for me but I did enjoy it. |
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Comment by: love - 2007-02-06 10:01
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| The desperation is clear, I sympathize much with the speaker. |
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| Good quiet tone that appeals. I've been in a similar situation so it resonates. |
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| Very clever -the way the first two lines of each stanza end with the last words of the first and last lines of the previous stanza. It's not easy to do that and keep the sincerity of the piece. Well done! |
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| This is pretty personal yet beautiful. |
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