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Hollykinz
Holly Taylor
United Kingdom, Rushden, Northants

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Masquerade

She walks away,
Feeling like a fool,
Heart shattered,
Another lesson learned.
Thoughts running loose in her head,
When she looks up at the stars,
Wishing she had not said,
Those words she meant so much,
She knows the gossip,
And the giggles,
They have shared,
At her expense,
Were no secret,
The embarrassment floods through her,
It fills the room,
Making her wish she was dead,
All the whispers,
And the stares,
From the people she thought
She could trust,
Realising that she hardly knew them at all,
She is the new joke,
The entertainment for the night,
The spotlight is on her,
Too bright to see,
Blind again,
Always so blind,
They all stare with piercing eyes,
Waiting for her to perform again,
For her to give them
Something else to scorn,
Making her wish she was dead.

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Comment by: - 2006-10-26 15:00
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Simple yet reflecting depths of profundity. Beautiful style!
Great job Holly :)
-Tyrvalan
Kerosene Comment by: Kerosene - 2006-09-23 12:18
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Very nice flow and choice of words. Nice job.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-09-13 12:14
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Painfully sad - a double-whammy of betrayal.

"Wishing she had not said / Those words she meant so much" is a very powerful line, but for my money you should never regret saying something you mean, even if the consequences are hard to live with.
CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-09-12 14:26
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Peer pressure. we spend so much of our lives seeking approval from people who, usually, aren't fit to clean our boots. But it still hurts.
Great expression of what every person with an opinion worth listening to has gone through at some point.

Cat. X
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