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Your verses have a sense of resentiment, but you relay them in a great deal of tact to get the words out, just enough to give them an effect to those reading the words...
Really good rhythm to the piece. Almost lyrical, it definitely has a pulse to it that goes beyond the rhyme of words. Very nice and I will definitely check out more of your work after this introduction.
Hmmm... I'm caught in the waiting, waiting like Schroedinger's Cat for either the hell you've promised, or for the creative leap to something clear and lasting.
