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Stupid Retard
who knows if you'll read this you piece of shit?
but i'm warning you my fucking fuse is lit
keep hurting my friend and something will happen
you can't keep heaping this kind of crap on
someone without something coming back on you
believe this or not it's true
this isn't a veiled threat
i owe you a massive debt
some karmic payback for all the shit you've done
to keep wounding someone, is that how you have your fun?
come after me if you think you've got the balls
in a knock-down fight we'll see which one of us falls
subtlety didn't work, so i'll be blunt
i'm watching you, you stupid arrogant cunt
and i don't care if you think i'm stupid and crass
i'll knock you on your fucking ass
and the distance between us is nothing at all
so don't think i won't make a call
your stupid harpy can listen as well
fuck off and take yourself to hell
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Comment by: jakrebs - 2006-10-01 11:23
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| A marked departure from your usual stuff. You pulled me in from the first couplet. Solid work. |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-15 18:41
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| I hope you never get mad at me or anyone I know. I was wondering if you'd heard from Neville recently. I enjoyed this poem because it's very emotional and angry. I like that in a man. bye Doris |
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oh, calm down sweet Paul :(*hugs*
but thank you for saying what Iā??ve been thinking >_< you have an eloquence with insult that i could never have! LOL |
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| Title to end- very fitting, just wish he would read it. *sarcastic voice* "What a beautiful tribute to a wonderful person" hahahahahahaha |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-13 16:30
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Muchas gracias, Paul. You have written what I wish I could. I still may. You have given Teri much support and love with all you do. You are a man above most especially this one of your words. He will take himself to hell and answer for what he has done, him and his filthy kind but for now we will make for certain nothing more is to happen. Te Dios bendice, mi amigo.
Enrique |
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