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inviscera
Stevie Gray
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

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Does Not Play Well With Others

Fine. Go ahead.
I'll listen while you tell me
how hard you've got it,
but I won't promise not to laugh.
These days,
I take my amusement where I can find it.

Your life makes you unhappy?
Then change it.
This stasis is of your own volition
and the excuses you're making
are lamer than you are.

Your self-induced misery bores me.
Don't mind me while I sit in the corner
and try to hone my ability
to kill with my mind.

I don't want your sympathy,
so don't expect mine.
My knee-jerk reaction is contempt here,
not pity.
Anyway
you look like you've already had your fill
of the milk of human kindness,
and where's it got you?

You can call me judgemental,
say I have no compassion.
Did I ever once tell you
that I was a people-person?
I'm sorry if you thought you saw in me
a kindred spirit.
I'm nothing like you.

I may be a victim of circumstance.
You
are a victim
by choice.

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deathbyacid Comment by: deathbyacid - 2006-12-02 22:19
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fuckin a...your amazing here...great work with word girl...damn..i love this
OriginalRisky1 Comment by: OriginalRisky1 - 2006-10-24 11:36
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Nice open free verse. All the thoughts we never give voice to. What would be the point? Such victims would only have yet one more reason to feel victimized.

Tucker
Comment by: - 2006-09-30 12:15
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I like your ending. it was so true... and you really got gritty and i could feel you not caring as this person rambled on and on! you've hit the spot of the emotion of not caring really well!
Comment by: - 2006-09-25 06:46
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Hell yeah! Now if I only had it on a shirt to wear to work...*wanders off muttering about blunt objects and co-workers*
kidquando Comment by: kidquando - 2006-09-20 09:43
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This poem was Bitchtastic. I wish I had this on a hundred index cards so I could had them out to all the people I meet whining. The 'milkfed' line was most fitting. I guess you've noticed that more often than not, the complainers are people who have it just fine.
Great job.
RJA
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