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This is a well structured piece and is full of insights that nobody wants to discuss anymore. I don't watch much television for that very reason, I pause commercials and limit what I read in the "news."
The school system has given away their rights of teaching to those that sponsor them since our taxes barely do.
Great writing! Yvylyn |
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Comment by: Min - 2006-09-15 10:27
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Definitely 'burn down the school'. Too much conditioning going on. Too much controlling. Stop believing the media....they only want your money from their sales. Some good lines by you. Thanks.
succumb/ed? |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-15 07:20
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So much to rule; with my hate on my sleeve
Great line. One of many, but definitely my favorite, and the beginnig of your poem is one of my favorite subjects: how we're ruled by the media. Bunch of sheep. As Stevie says, I like angry. :) T. xo |
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3rd stanza definitely my favourite here, though I also love the lines "So much to rule; with my hate on my sleeve" and "Burn down the school; before the teachers can leave".
Nice one. I like angry. |
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