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PiscesQueen
Avah Love
United States, ohio, Toledo

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Your Puppet

Mock me, rape me, sedate me again

I'm your puppet to the very end

Sit by your side while you condescend

Grasping the pain as we play pretend

Taking the role of your best friend

Constantly pondering what you intend

Giving my all to comprehend

Yearning for you to transcend

The rules you set will start to bend

And just before love can descend

Your heart retracts, you contend

But, I'm your puppet to the very end

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Count Drecula Comment by: Count Drecula - 2008-10-08 22:06
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Darlink Avah:
Allow yhurself to bee my poppit.
Allow yhurself to fall undar my shpell.
Allow yhurself to leuwk into my ice.
Allow me to sedate yhu weeth my voyce.
I vant to sock yhur BLOT!
Count Drecula
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2008-01-24 20:28
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Then you were none of the above.
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2007-12-03 15:23
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I like the beat - the pulse. Important topic too.
It seems to take us so long to cut the strings and stand alone.
I thought I could stand alone, together - but there is something so perversely attractive in giving someone your remote.

From another angle this is a horror story - how one person can be moulded to another - you manage to convey multiple facets of this human condition.
Thanks.
Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-07-03 13:49
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Such an innocent asking/need.
The Voice is all that deflects disappointment.
I would like to think that such receptivity will ultimately meet the Walking Love.
frumpalump Comment by: frumpalump - 2007-04-30 02:15
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"i'm your puppet to the very end" nice.. i dig it.
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