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boredom
Electronic devices cry out
like barkers at a carnival
each claiming to be more exciting than the last
A thousand books
flutter gently, like batted eyelashes,
offering to unfold themselves
and reveal worlds within
The blank page
looks up at me, pleading
for a drop of ink,
begging for meaning
Pinball machine in the corner
echos the sounds
of victories past
declaring physics to be
the most exciting pasttime
An army of DVDs
standing stiff-backed at attention
glaring at the books across the room
boasting of thrilling tales
of love, betrayal,
and explosions
And in the center of all this
I sit
motionless
on the couch
bored
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| I really liked this! The stanza: The blank page, looks up at me, pleading for a drop of ink, begging for meaning" is the best of the piece. It really brings out every passion of a writer. Brilliant. |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-17 18:23
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Your descriptions here are very good and I laughed when I read the end of your poem. I have felt so many times like this. It is very well written and you detail feelings to relate very easily.
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Comment by: lsjones - 2006-09-17 13:38
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| I know exactly how this feels. Awesome poem. Loved every word. |
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i really like the meter of this piece. it flows like a freeverse, but the meter has a very hammered sterness about it. Great word choices, and descriptive lines, especially in the 5th stanza.
thanks for the read! great write. |
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