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A bunch of screws and wood splinters
Gather a bunch of screws and wood splinters then bolt it on a small kid's head. What do have now? A crude mimicry of a roman governor adorned with laurels. Why am I thinking this eh? For no reason at all! Seriously, I think it's just the coolness of it or the moral depravity associated with the act, I mean, where in the world can you see that.
Well, it was dictated to me by the voices. Who are they? They are the voices. A bunch of rabble-rousing geezers I couldn't see. They told me that they came from some panhandler's obnoxious fart mixed with some oxygen then voila you got there some raunchy pack of pungent nefarious nay Sayers. One lousy afternoon they 'showed up' man, I almost puked at the ghastly apparition. They said the group had just witnessed the prime minister having intercourse with a limbless cadaver. Prime minister in a no holds barred coitus with a cadaver? what's goin on inside their cranium?
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| thanks for the idea, i was actually considering it. It was a free write produced out of frustration. i mean, i wrote it when my boss and his cohorts kinda grilled me for messing up on something though in my perspective, i didn't really messed up at all. |
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| Intriguing idea, if it certainly seems a lot like a free write, with free write's many problems. The title is good, and I am amused by the idea of you thinking the voices in your head are crazy, but I would love to see this re-worked into an actual story. |
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| Thanks for the critique, i appreciate it. I think i will need the specifics regarding the typos though. Have a great one. |
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"...depravity associated with the act. I mean, where in the world can you see that?"
"...mixed with some oxygen. Then voila! You got there..."
(start a new paragraph) "One lousy afternoon they "showed up", man. I almost puked..."
"What's going on..."
Just some typos. You have quite the imagination, don't you. Funny write. ~ Yvylyn |
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