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Krissielicious
Krystle Campbell
United States, NV, Las Vegas

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Ouch

It hurts more than works can describe
The story of my life
It's just depressing to live like me
But I do have some moments that mean a lot to me
But sometimes that's pushed aside
It hurts to breathe
Some times are better left forgotten
Remember when I was walking out
And he said, "What's wrong with you?
You're not good enough, your makeup is too much and I hate what your wearing, you look fat."
How does it feel to have my own father say that
Right before he gives me a fake hug and says :I love you.
But there's few that truly love me
And fewer I really trust
It's hard to stay strong
When life hurts so much

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Comment by: - 2006-09-21 18:56
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WOW! I can so relate!!! This was amazing! It is wonderful to read poems that you can relate to.... after reading this I might post my peoms "You Dont care" Parts 1,2 and 3. I won a contest with on of them, So when I post them you should read them. You can relate. This was wonderful! Great work...

oh yea... and one question did you mean to purt "it hurts more than WORDS can describe" or did you mean WORKS?

GREAT POEM!

~Princess Padge
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