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marinka
marinka swift
United States, california, undecided

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Hiding

A girl leaves her light on and doesn't sleep.
Her bed sheets hug the mattress for warmth in her absence.
Staring out the window until the sun comes back she waits,
to be taken to anywhere else.
Hoping a passerby will see she is there, not wanting to be in the dark.

At 7 years her fairy night-light provokes monsters,
and foreign shapes away.
So all is safe.

A family goes away for vacation,
leaving hallway lights on to pretend
routine life in the midst of silent dark.

We drive at night with headlights to brightly announce our presence.

In backyard forests and country quilts,
the sun's sleeping luminations dim, laying
slight glows among all below. Nature's night-light,
Showing just as much as should be seen.

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jbachand Comment by: jbachand - 2006-11-01 15:45
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Despite a few seemingly unnecessary repetitions, this poem strikes a strong chord in the final few lines. I like the premise and the simple imagery. Thanks for a good read. :)
Comment by: - 2006-09-21 18:45
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I liked this one too, you really have a unique style of writing that keeps the reader wondering. This one to leaves you unknowing at the end. It jumps from the little girl in the window to things about nature. I like this peice also!

~Princess Padge
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