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Comment by: jakemac - 2007-02-04 21:03
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| i dig cat, very antithetic of that romanticist bullshit that everyone's all down with, i dig. |
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Hey,
The ending triplette of "damn" was interesting I think. It came off slightly mellowdramatic, but it added a final rhythmical pull I thought your piece realy needed in the end.
Interesting style,
MM |
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And damn....
I liked that! |
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| I have that particular wrap suffocating my poor innocent head right now. It's a bitch, isn't it? Good thing the phone sex operation is on hold. lol Great poem with a cute little twist. |
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| Ah, love a little story with a twist at the end. Thanks... |
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