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| I can relate to this I've been there...Gret job! |
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Comment by: Juanita - 2007-11-04 12:44
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| So much truth in this poem. So many times people fall out of love and remain in the relationship. I've done it myself so I can definetly relate to this. |
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| Very nice. And you sure hit the nail on the head with the question of why people can't be brave enough to end a bad relationship. Thank you. |
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The last line, while it would be fine as an integral part of the poem, seems to dangle like a broken tail. This could be a result of formatting. Close the whitespace so the last line comes at the right time.
I want to see more of your work. |
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| Very relateable, I liked it alot. ~Sarah |
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