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kaykay9611
kayla geordan
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hallucination

one day, a beautiful long-haired woman appeared to me. She was wearing a long white dress that had a light-yellowish glow around it. She is kind, thoughtful, smart, and helpful. She helps me out of sticky situations. Around her neck there is a necklace that clearly states,"Property of God". She is my guardian angel. She is my mother. She is always with me. Her dress shines in the morning sun, and her blond hair flows lightly with the beautiful shine. Then the clouds split, and the sun shines down upon her. A voice comes down from the clearing. It is a deep voice saying, "It is time for you to come home." I will miss her dearly for the rest of my life, then we will be reunited again. This is a quote from I'll Love You Forever, I'll Like You For Always: "I'll love you forever, I'll like you for always. As long as you're living, my mommy you'll be."

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john ray Comment by: john ray - 2006-09-22 06:28
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i am always interested with pieces about mothers. i lost mine when i was only 6 years old so i never knew how it was like to have one... very simple but powerful!
Comment by: - 2006-09-21 19:43
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I remember this one! It is wonderful!! It always gives me chills! Great!

and her blond flows lightly with the beautiful shine.
and her blonde hair flows ligtly with the beautiful shine.
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