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angel outside my window
Sometimes when you stare out of a window,
You might see something that isn't there.
For a brief second you might see something you have never seen before.
For a moment you might see something from your past.
Sometimes I see, standing right next to me
Someone I haven't seen for more than a year.
I see my mother.
When I need her the most, I know she is here.
For I saw her one day out of the clear,
Since then she has never left my side.
My mom's spirit lives through me,
But the way my life has led it is in respect for her.
She is there outside of my window.
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| I hope you don't mind, I'm cutting and pasting this one (with your info of course) and sending it to a friend of mine who lost her dad very unexpectedly two years ago. It's very beautiful, and I know she will love it. |
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| Very honest and well-done. The only thing I would suggest... more imagery, please! I can't really see this in my head very easily. |
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| Hey Kayla. I have one word for you, PURE. I'm not sure what else I can say about this. The flow was soft and gentle, a great piece. |
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| if you this is you experience,please try some exercises.Try getting calm in the calm state controll your self with your breath.Close your eyes and just wait in the void.The light will come for you.This is a sign.Don't be scared,no fear and you'll see the world for your own self. |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-21 19:47
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WOW KAYLA!!! This one is absolutly WONDERFUL! I mean WOW this is GREAT!!! I dont know why you never shared this one with me either!!! You need to start sharing more!!! WOW!!! AMAZING!!! You have improved SOO much since you first started writing GREAT JOB!
Your Sis,
Princess Padge |
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