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| lovely jodi, a classic poem. |
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Comment by: Sophia - 2006-10-27 01:41
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| Beautifully written, every word seems carefully chosen to express the emotion. Lovely. |
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Comment by: - 2006-10-13 14:15
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| Love the lines 'My eyes crystalize, in baby blue' and I enjoyed the rest of the poem, its a very intreguing piece which draws you back to it over and over. |
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Comment by: suleem - 2006-09-27 14:38
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| There is so much depth on so many lebvels of consciousness. I am aware of all, as in body mind and soul. |
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| amazing. you are making imagine who she is. I'm going to venture a guess. She's death personified :) at least that's what I think of when I read this. I interprete it as you crave for death as an escape and you are describing when she finally arrives to take you with her. |
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