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Khema
Kimmy Lovestar
Canada, ontario, toronto

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Rainbow Mega Groovy

Rainbow mega groovy,
You are.
Those languid hungry kisses
Roam fluid melting
Over me,
Across the planet
To the ocean floor.

Purring chakras spin
Wild and free inside me.
I scream your love, silent
Gushing diamond lust,
Writhing these unsettled
Mmmm mmmm hips.

Melodic madness
In a rosy cheek rumble;
Sweet gratification
On a hedonistic platter,
A tasty lust INTENSE -
Tripping on its power

We see it ( Brilliant )
We feel it ( Silk )
We hear it ( Celestial )
We smell it ( Heaven )
We taste it ( Cherry )
We KNOW it ( Transcendence )

Without boundaries,
Spiritual wonderment.
Spirals of joy
In this soul nexus.
I am unfastened,
I am revealed
For you.

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willyblake Comment by: willyblake - 2008-08-16 13:20
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Hey, you really kicked some ass on this one. The phrasing gains momentum and adds to the energy. And it's like....sensual...I got a little excited: Writhing these unsettled Mmmm mmmm hips; I am unfastened, I am revealed For you. You go girl! As well I enjoyed your play with words: Rainbow mega-groovy; Purring chakras spin Wild and free inside me; Melodic madness In a rosy cheek rumble

Nice licks! Good work.
Comment by: - 2007-02-14 10:47
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wow, this is realy cool, i enjoyed every moment of it!!


keep em' coming!
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile Online- 2007-02-13 21:34
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Such bliss.
TequilaTwilight Comment by: TequilaTwilight - 2007-01-26 09:03
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I love the rhythm of this poem, it's a quirky piece with a jazz feel, a poem that definitely needs to be read out loud.
suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-12-06 09:31
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THank you for having a fresh taste in writing poetic verse. I like the way you moved me through this piece.
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