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fiveringsstudent
Colin Ellis
United States, MO, Kirksville

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Ode to Mario Kart

With small green shells a-twirling,
And red ones to soon follow after,
'Tis mushrooms we need,
That burst of speed,
To check our opponents' laughter.

Ahead in the road I see yellow,
Banana peels for sure!
I skid to the right
Avoiding the plight
Of a sticky and slippery detour.

A lightning bolt splits the sky!
My tiny characters squeak!
Our high-pitched cry
As flattened we lie
The outcome now looks bleak!

At last! The coveted blue shell!
The first place team is mine!
From my hand it sings,
With magical wings,
To fulfill my intentions malign.

A bob-omb in the road ahead!
No time to swerve away!
I cover my eyes,
Hear my characters' cries,
Of their explosive delay.

The finish line is in sight!
Salvation so wonderfully dear,
If it weren't for the fact,
That on this track,
I have six more laps to clear!

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hatchzel Comment by: hatchzel - 2007-05-16 21:54
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I made my bf read this- wow NINTENDO Should give you an award. I love the game inspite of all the upcomin games. When I am not writing Im glued to mmy PS2 and Wii. Thanks for the great read I wish I was Yoshi leading the race


I guess we are all a race on life- we may be mario, luigi. toad or even King Koopa. We all have missions and we have to all survive to reach the finish line
JMonroe Comment by: JMonroe - 2007-02-21 06:19
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hahahahaha! To add to the trippy-ness, I just found my Mario pin in a box of old badges about half an hour ago! Great poem! (Could have so many hidden meanings too)
Sankylady20 Comment by: Sankylady20 - 2007-02-02 20:51
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Haha, I love it!, I Like the way you think :) ~ Sarah
isismarie Comment by: isismarie - 2006-10-03 20:49
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This is awesome! Freaking great. I LOVE Mario Kart, and I love how this is freaking everything that really reminds me of that game. Great description and the words flow really great.
Comment by: - 2006-09-22 21:05
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That is unique and trippy. It makes me think about recent and not so recent experiences of my own. Nice job!
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