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| This is cute. I like how very serious it was until the end. A friend of mine once wrote an insanely florid and gorgeous poem about snow that ended with the line, "Snow is lovely and calm and it's perfect and mellow/but whatever you do don't eat any that's yellow!" This reminded me of that in a wonderful way. |
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| Heh, this is great. I really thought this was going to be one of those powerful emotional poems, where there's a gut wrenching decision and in the end, it shocks. I like that. Brilliant. |
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Comment by: foxfyre - 2006-09-25 22:12
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hahahahaha!!! I love it.
I always choose the chocolate muffin, but then again I'm not a fan of blueberry ;-) |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-23 23:06
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hehe this was good... its awesome... I have noticed on this site there are many poems with twist endings and I really like that! I love this one... you would have never guessed it to be about food! I loved it and now I want to go cook my muffins! We have chocolate chip!
Thats for the comment on my poem! :)
~Princess Padge |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-23 15:08
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| Haha! Great ending, great poem. I needed this smile, so thank you! As Min wrote, mmmmmmmmmm, blueberry muffins. I'll take two with butter. :) Teri |
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