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mejaflora
Ida Gul
Singapore, Singapore

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the end justifies the means

On the highest throne you sit
Unaware of the little people
Daring to speak your mind
Doesn't matter if it's dribble

The course of your actions
Continue to pollute and tear away
Bringing pain to most innocent
But you promise, this is the way

Understand this though, kind sir
You may rule this world today
but when the end finally comes
your bones the demon will play

so enjoy your power for now
by all means, go for the kill
the dead will judge you at the end
for you, kind sir, hell is the deal

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Comment by: - 2006-09-25 06:40
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wow this is deep! I love it and the ending was a PERFECT ending!!! Great job!! That was amazing!

~Princess Padge
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2006-09-24 12:37
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The third stanza makes this poem. It gives the reader a powerful image. I also liked your title. I am so horrible at naming my poems.
It seems ironic that I have the words to write a poem but not to name it!

A very good write and read.**
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-09-24 08:25
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This piece is very effective. The theme is a valid one that the reader can relate to easily in my opinion.
This poem is well formatted and very straight forward theme-wise.

Great write over all, lovely word choices.
thanks for the read.
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