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Scott Waugh
United States, Oklahoma, B... Fu..

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It Doesn't Matter Anyway

It's early morning, a new days dawning,
I've been up all night, thinken bout you.

You know, the thing is, that I finally realized,
that its time for the both of us, to face the truth.

So it doesn't matter anyway,
What you have to say.
It doesn't matter anyway,
What you do...
It doesn't matter anyway,
Who is right or wrong.
It doesn't matter anyway....
I'm already gone.

This shouldn't be such a damn big surprise,
Cause you never truely let me in, anyway.

So I've packed up what's left of my pride and dignity,
I can't take it anymore, so I'll say it once again....

It doesn't matter anyway,
What you have to say.
It doesn't matter anyway,
What you do....
It doesn't matter anyway,
Who is right or wrong,
It doesn't matter anyway....
I'm already gone.

I'm already gone...
Catch the clue.
I'm already gone...
I'm through with you.

Repeat chorus

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lolly Comment by: lolly - 2006-09-29 22:01
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She'll never get you baby. And you are so right, it DOESN'T MATTER ANYWAY. You were gone long before you left. Love the last four lines. Really strong. First stanza ... I'd have been up all night thinkin' about ME! Really like "This shouldn't be such a damn big surprise,
Cause you never truely let me in, anyway." (Truly.) xoxoxo
bonnieclarke Comment by: bonnieclarke - 2006-09-25 11:41
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love the rhythm and rhyme, Scott. I think we've all felt this way at a time in our lives, and can relate to your words. great piece.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-09-24 08:23
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i like the lyrical aspect of this piece. It is very rhythmical, especially approaching the chorus parts. Lovely word chcies and an intresting theme. this piece works.

thanks for the read.
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