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Flavor of the Week
will turn sour
then where will you be
with that bad taste
in your mouth
and no one
to spit it into
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Nate, this poem has a lot of appeal. On the surface it seems so simple, but after reading it again it made me think of so much more. Well done. --Robert Barlow
