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sinkingsaint
shahbaz khan
United Arab Emirates, dubai, dubai

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Feast for a beast

Oh I woke up again
Locked in chains
Get me out of here
It's dark I m afraid
Don't wanna fight
No crusade
I thought it's over
But u've sharpen the blade
Wanna kill?
Want me dead?
Steal my freedom like I said
Birth of a child
Furry gets wild
Fresh blood to be sucked
The feast
For a beast
Suffer till the end
My innocent friend

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poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-01-26 10:28
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It has been expressed very well and the lines are of just perfect lengths well done it is truly a very beautiful piece
markamihalko Comment by: markamihalko - 2007-04-23 06:21
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Great piece... It pulled me in and kept my interest throughout. While short, it had great imagery! Thanks...
deathbyacid Comment by: deathbyacid - 2006-11-02 20:26
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yes wonderful writing indeed
Comment by: - 2006-10-04 14:22
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this is odd. you trap me into a nightmare i want to escape. good job! though the shortcuts on words are annoying. i got over it! I enjoyed!
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