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Scott Waugh
United States, Oklahoma, B... Fu..

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Kristi Marie

Kristi Marie, You're a sight to see,
and I can't believe, your leaving tomorrow.

Kristi Marie, I'm even on my knees,
Your leaving, brings me such great sorrow.

But I understand, why you're leaving me.
I must let you go...
I've got to set you free.


Like a distant memory,
You'll come back to me.
Like the rivers to the seas,
You'll come back to me.(4 x)

and when you walk back through my open door...
I'll kiss you tenderly.


Kristi Marie, do you still beleive,
that leaving me, will solve all your problems?

Kristi Marie, I can plainly see,
this lesson for us, will be a hard one.


But I understand, why your leaving me.
I must let you go...
I got to set you free.

Like a distant memory,
You'll come back to me.
Like the rivers to the seas,
You'll come back to me. (4 x)

And when you walk back through me open door,
Like you have, so many times before.
I'll brush the teardrops, from your eyes...
And kiss you tenderly.

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barry edwards Comment by: barry edwards - 2006-11-01 15:51
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would love to hear your stuff to music man.
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-10-23 03:17
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The name goes so well with this piece.
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-09-29 21:13
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Tapping my toe as I read it. Nice lyrical flow, obviously, and depth of emotion. As Manda said, it is catchy. I'd love to hear this put to music. T.
Manda Comment by: Manda - 2006-09-26 16:47
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would definitely be a hit as a song, simply because the subject matter is universal, the rhyme is 'catchy' (sorry but it is and that's a good thing in music :) ) and it has a memorable feel to it. tender and bittersweet.
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