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scotspoetryman
George McGavin
United Kingdom, Scotland, Aberdeen

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A True Jewel Named Etive

Yonder hills of beauty! Sparkle waters that glisten,
tranquility embraced, silence? No! Listen!
On Etive's clear edge, there's lapping of water,
and bustling sounds, of a playful brown otter.

A scene of serenity, no birds in view,
but chirping of sparrows, hidden in a bush too.
On expanse of the slopes, hear the rut of the deer,
echoes of the distance, evidently so clear.

This highland glen, a true jewel named Etive,
proud in the country, to which it is native.
Nowhere close, to many worldly scenes,
nor by comparison, in anyone's dreams.

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Comment by: - 2006-11-15 12:35
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I assume Etive would rhyme with native. :D I don't usually like poems that rhyme, I find them forced and unnatural, but this one is beautiful.
Alive86 Comment by: Alive86 - 2006-10-27 14:08
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Great details

You made the picture come alive with your words,

Enjoyed reading this poem very much
Keep it up

Love
Alive :)
tinaleigh120 Comment by: tinaleigh120 - 2006-09-27 15:44
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I don't know how to pronounce Etive either but this is a beautiful, descriptive poem.
Min Comment by: Min - 2006-09-25 10:08
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This conjured up a highland scene for me, a beautiful natural landscape. I have one difficulty: I do not know how to pronounce Etive!
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