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PrometheousUnbnd
Alfred Derro IV
United States, Pennsylvania, Harleysville

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All to Pieces

All to Pieces
Written by A. J. Derro



Pisces fell
that hell should rise
and some strange specter,
blinded by love-light
a reflection of myself in God's own eyes;

I am that poor spirit's likeness,
and less than able for it
to summon myself as witness
to the heavens above which sit,


as if on a throne of shadows, and crowned.
And I am just as lost as they are found;

by their tease of fire overhead
from the celestial orb to the mire, all to pieces, spread.

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rosysophia Comment by: rosysophia - 2006-09-25 18:01
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This is great, AJ... but still a bit vague. Keep working on it. I love the words you use, as always... but your images are still a little weak. I could see it a bit more this time. Definately one of your stonger pieces.
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