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JohnnySodoff
John D. Valadez
United States, Texas, Corpus Christi

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Eardrum Samba

Badda-bop, bop, badda-bop, pop is the night we made the beats as beats, dusty steps on the bouncing floor and hand-claps high on tables and boxes.

The morning where union style minds got slaps of paps, of paps, of paps.

The pot lid, ear candy
And the table, ear candy,

The popsicle percussion of the sly Improvioso and the naked Improviana, beat box bodies of the Emerald Cause, a case for love and boundless output of open-minded cleanliness from a madman's soul.

Hysterified slammings of jammings, vanishing in the moment, disappearing in the Hurricane Jungle where rocks fall upon stretched hides and gorillas pound their great fists into the waiting stumps of retired trees, old palms with no use, now important instruments of our swamp-box insanity.

Rata-tat-tat, ba-data, nat, nat
Sip-pop-a-dop,
Ba-dop, bop, bop

We roll in on the fever metronome; it plays on in clockwork stylings in the mind and
travel-guides our punch into the abyss like fury-firing rams in the stony walls of castles passed.

The data rips onto brain-strip hard drive to print stamps on the ears, audio watermarks for the protection of precious sanity and rumba-minded styles in the hands of the enlightened.

We badda, bop-ting, badda-badda, bop-tinged our hearts away into the early day,

Everything as it should be in the rhythm of life.

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Comment by: - 2007-03-30 11:02
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i wanna 1.

2.

uh 1ey anna 2ey anna lottinnbottinncotton
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with a sir sodoff, of course
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2006-12-28 02:56
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There is only one word that I can think of to appropriately describe this: Groovy.
=D
Kerosene Comment by: Kerosene Online- 2006-09-28 06:21
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Very cool John. Are you a musician? Drummer or bass player?

Interesting read.
nonalienabductee Comment by: nonalienabductee - 2006-09-26 12:33
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Really have no idea what I just read. Did I read it? I swear that I clicked on a sound file and music played. Not a single understandable thing in that whole story, but it was still really cool. Scat writing!
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