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How hard is this?
To love and not be loved in return
My heart hurts
My place aches
I try to ignore you
But-
You just won't leave
You refuse-
Until I smile back at you.
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HOLY CRAP! I have a poem written JUST like this. that's just really odd. :)
anyhow : I felt just like that once. it touched me and made me re-live it. which is sad for me but good for you because it was a really good piece if it did such a thing!
Good Poem!
mine is called : iā??d love to hate me love you : if you want to check it out! :) )
I sense the emotions coming from true experience here,This is why I feel its got very good depth of sense, and that which gives it both grit and punch. truly notable, for its raw sentiment
