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tinaleigh120
Christina Pritchard
United States, Florida, Boca Raton

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Enough

I can't stand it-
Never felt this,
Its pure agony
Now I understand poor Emily Dickenson
She just wanted to die
In the end, she wrote it
Even though she was ashamed
So I write it too
You will never get me to cry
Nor will I give in
You just lost!
All you get is the satisfaction of hurting me
Which, for you,
Is probably enough'¦

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Comment by: - 2006-10-03 14:52
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blunt. emotional.

there isn't much more to say. it would ruin the contrast of the beauty in the force of the poem!
InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-09-27 22:22
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This is a very poignant piece that (I would suggest) can only be written by one who is living it. (I hope it gets better, too)
You've captured pain perfectly here and then added defiance to the end and I love it.
Yvylyn
Comment by: - 2006-09-27 07:55
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This is sad and you deserve better... I hope that all of these poems abotu you hurting are not true... but if they are I am very sorry! And I hope that evertying gets better for you REALY soon! It takes some time... but things will get better! :)

~Princess Padge
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