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yellowjacket
Sid Beckett
United Kingdom, Oxon, Banbury

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Tuna for the soul

As I scrape the bottom of the can
With a fork I used for dinner
(A few weeks ago)
And haven't got around to cleaning
I realise that my life is futile

I probe desperately into the corner
trying to scrounge a few more flakes
or something that smell's worse before it goes off
determindly attempting to garner a few more pence
from a mere fifty-seven pence expenditure

I see the waste around me,
of packaging, from food or drink
and yesterdays must-have item,
discarded like so much flotsum
Billy Bass, lava lamp, glowy electric ball thingy,

I realise that so much about us,
is unneccesary
and expendable,
and I wish all baggage could be refused,
like an old pot noodle

And I realise more:
that the things we hang onto,
and the things we reject
Are often confused
And I wonder if...

...should I have said yes?
...would you have stayed?
...could I have fought more?
...was he worth more than you?
...did I make the right choice?

And then I realise one more thing:

It's just an empty can of cat food.

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CatmanStu Comment by: CatmanStu - 2006-10-02 14:08
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Technically itâ??s an empty can that used to contain CAT FOOD; if it was a can of CAT FOOD, it would still have CAT FOOD in it turning it from an empty can of CAT FOOD into just a plain old CAN OF CAT FOOD!!!!

Cat.

PS - Why do I suddenly feel hungry?
suleem Comment by: suleem - 2006-09-30 09:25
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The depth of thought is wonderful, very unique process of releasing the ending of a love.
Some look into a mirror for reflection others into a can of tuna.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-09-30 04:22
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Oh dear.
Jamilah Comment by: Jamilah - 2006-09-29 23:40
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Yes. First, I like the imagery here. The fork you used a few weeks ago and "trying to scrounge a few more flakes." And I like the way you bridge the existentialism of the tuna can and things in general with the questions generated by a love affair gone bad. There's a surface meaning, and much deeper meanings here. Your last line sums it all up perfectly.
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