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Bbounty1
Scott Waugh
United States, Oklahoma, B... Fu..

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Fallen Angel

I'm your Fallen Angel, baby
And it don't matter, No it don't matter,
What I say or do....
I just end up,
Hurting me or you.

I'm your Fallen Angel, baby
It don't matter, How I try to stay away,
I just can't help myself...
Dear Jesus,
Hear me when I pray.

I'm your Fallen Angel, baby
Please, Please help me...
Please, Please help me...
Help me make it,
Through another day.


I've got to tell you....
My wings, my wings,
My wings are all broken.
And I just can't,
No I just can't....
Fly away.

I'm your Fallen Angel Baby.
I know, You know,
We know, She knows....
That I just can't help myself.

And my wings are all broken,
I'm your Fallen Angel baby...
And I just can't, no I just can't...
Fly Away.

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isismarie Comment by: isismarie - 2006-11-30 14:14
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I really like this, it sounds like it would be awesome set to music. I like it.
VB 16 Comment by: VB 16 - 2006-10-17 02:28
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Angels - the stuff of imaginations! And these lines fire my imagination quite well.
lolly Comment by: lolly - 2006-09-30 00:50
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man. you let everybody. now i don't know. i'm sad.
Comment by: - 2006-09-29 21:46
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This is very beautiful. I can imagine a fallen angel with broken wings and the inability to fly. It's a very sad image. You bring this person to life with your words. I wish I could listen to your music. bye Doris
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