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METUO
My palms are clammy. A bead of sweat slowly trickles down my forehead, before stinging my eye. I blink hard to get rid of it. Must compose myself. Can't let them see I'm scared. That's showing weakness. Why am I here? What have I done to deserve this? I don't know the answer to either of these questions. My heart starts beating a polka in my chest; rapidly becoming a heavy garage beat. If I could hook up a sound system to my chest I could make a fortune. That is if I survive today. Suddenly a thought crosses my mind and I look round frantically. It's as I feared I'm alone! There's no one to help me. I can see them getting closer. There's no way out. I have no other choice. The first one reaches me. I swallow hard, and then somehow manage to get out the words.
'Excuse me sir, would you like to try a grape? We have them on special offer today.'
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| It has a weird sense of humor to it, maybe it is just the Polka reference. That music almost makes me giggle every time I hear it. |
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Comment by: mynamelez Online- 2006-11-03 02:24
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| Interesting story. I enjoyed reading this and was quite surprised by the outcome. Some people have a real problem interacting with other people, expecially if they come on too strong. Perhaps this could lead onto a sour-grapes type of epilogue. |
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Comment by: lofty - 2006-11-01 10:29
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reminds me of the oafs at the supermarket stopping my shop..
cool. |
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Comment by: - 2006-10-22 10:10
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| Wonderfully executed. I especially love the catch at the end. |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-10-04 10:12
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| I know I probably shouldn't laugh because, as Sheri says, there are some people who are totally phobic, but the end - I expected something so different and when I read "grape", I had to laugh. Great write. T. xo |
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