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Baseballerstar
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Superman Is Dead

Superman's Dead
by õ!ô~*`Bryce Dressler`*~ô!õ

Johnny J Smith
had straight A's in school.
Class president every year
he never broke the rules.

Had the coolest friends
never got in fights.
But his friends never saw him
after school at night.

Every problem thrown his way
he fought it to the end.
His family and friends
nicknamed him superman.

Saving damsels in distress
standing up for the weak.
He had the intelligence of a genius
the room always quite when he'd speak.

But nobody knew what happened
late every single night.
When Johnny was caught in the middle
of his mother and father's fight.

Every day after school
Johnny would walk home alone.
Come home to his parents,
to a family with a heart of stone.

Objects were thrown
as they fly across his face.
He tried so hard to please
but he was seen as a disgrace.

His grades would start to slip
and he would fight even more.
But the more that he fought
the harder he was thrown to the floor.

Friends began to leave him
people ignored him as he spoke
as hard as he tried to fix it all
his life was only seen as a joke.

Bottles and knives still flying
from one room to the next.
Giving up on everything else
he took advantage of one object.

He slowly cried as the pain took hold
remembering the life once adored.
Brought down to this hopeless sham
a life now only ignored.

With his last remaining minute
he reached for a paper and pen.
Leaving a note for whoever cared
or cared for a life that had been.

Days had past since then
before he was found
his parents killed each other
the house no longer made a sound.

Old friends came again
to see the horrible site
No soon after did they find the note
that the young boy did write.

Everyone held their breath
as the note was slowly read.
Written with four crimson words
"Your Superman is Dead."


(C) 2006 Bryce Dressler

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nivipooh Comment by: nivipooh - 2007-06-16 11:12
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Really sad and the poem really gets you right from beginning...nice ryhmes and again brilliantly thought..
ErinJane Comment by: ErinJane - 2007-05-08 09:58
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Amazing. Great rythum. I read it with a steady beat which is always pleasing to the ears.
Grounded Vertigo Comment by: Grounded Vertigo - 2007-03-13 05:26
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I really liked this piece. It's hard to maintain rhyme and also create such a powerful poem. A great read, thanks!
MimiStar Comment by: MimiStar - 2007-02-06 16:27
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Wow! This really brought tears to my eyes. I think it was awesome well written and it captured me! And Its very true. You never know what someone is going through. Beautiful.
brandoncintron Comment by: brandoncintron - 2007-01-27 18:24
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Very sad, very powerful. Especially since I had a friend who lived a life very similar to this, and ended up commiting suicide in the 9th grade.
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